Short Story: The Ancient Song: Part II
The Ancient Song
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With her mind racing fast, Tia called Adam, Michael's brother to see what's got into him to be drinking at 6:00 a.m in the morning. Time was of the essence and she had a bigger fish to fry.
She paced around the room, finding the chirping birds an annoyance. She needed absolute silence to put her mind to work. After breakfast, she sat quietly for a while, putting her thoughts in order. Left Michael a text and focused on the mystery in hand.

She recited the verse that the man had spoken, absorbing it.
'the birds sang the ancient song,
the final wave is coming along,
the one responsible for undoing the wrong,
should return the rose where it belongs.'
The first line:
'The birds sang the ancient song'...
Deduction: Since it's all about me, as he implied, then the ancient song could mean a childhood lullaby that has been passed on in the family but then the birds don't make sense. Could the birds be the members of the family?
The second line:
'the final wave is coming along'...
Deduction: Could it mean death or could it mean a certain event?
This one thing must be common to all the members for it to connect with the first line so that rules out death as grandma is alive and well.
The day was passing by at the rate of 15 hours a day.
The third line:
'the one responsible for undoing the wrong'...
Deduction: If I'm the one, then could it have something to do with any of my previous cases. Of course, what else could it be! But then, the interpretation of the other lines would be meaningless.
Could it be related to my parents? Should I talk to Grammy about it?
She set that thought aside and focused on the final line:
'should return the rose where it belongs'...
Deduction: This one's the simplest of all. He wants something that I have which should be returned to the place where it belongs.
With the dusk falling, she had her deductions but the one thing that still troubled her was 'the wrong' in the verse.
With her fourth cup of coffee in her hand, she looked at the saffron sky wondering what she has got herself into this time around. When the phone rang, she took a deep breath and readied herself for another strange conversation.
'I assume you already have a theory.' said the deep voice, with a strange playfulness which got on her nerves.
'You're damn right I do but it doesn't make any sense, at all.' she spoke, carefully.
'Well, I hope you're as good as people say because you don't have time to play around.' she heard him say while she wished she could knock that smirk off his face.
'Instead of doubting my ability, it'd be better if you tell me what's going on here and who exactly are you?' she spat back.
'My identity isn't your concern. A life is in danger. And you're the only one who can save the tragedy from happening.
' his tone changed, entirely.
' his tone changed, entirely.
'the one that hides in a disguise
is found at the ninth hour from sunrise
the rose shall return to its fate
find the way before it's too late' recited the deep voice, again.
'Another one?!' gosh, not again.
'24 hours remain.' he spoke the final words.
'Wait!' and the line went dead.
To Be Continued...
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ooh! an intriguing piece.
ReplyDeletewaiting for the next one :)
Thanks, Chotu! Wait till tomorrow! :)
DeleteThis is not accepted.. Already, the you've posted it 24Hrs late.. now again 24hrs to wait.. >_<
ReplyDeleteCuriosity at its peak.. A lot of permutation n combinations running through my mind..
Haha, be patient Navneet! You're welcome to post your theory! :D
DeleteIt's getting really good. Waiting for the next part. Can't wait to see how it ends. Really good writing
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Sara! :)
DeleteI'm loving it. Wonderfully written.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Gowthama! :)
DeleteI'm totally loving this series. A detective who gets a bunch of poems as clues? It really is interesting!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Mithila! Glad you enjoyed it! Do stop by often. :)
DeleteHow long before the next?
ReplyDeleteJust a few hours! :)
DeleteSo, now what? Hasn't fitured out the first, now has a second to figure out. She had better be a good detective, given she only has 24 hours to solve the mystery.
ReplyDeleteOh, this one's making her mind on a whirlwind. Let's wait and see what it does to her. :)
DeleteAgain continued !!...
ReplyDeleteHaha, yeah. Just a little more wait. :)
DeleteThe clock is ticking....better get part 3 out before the suspense kills us! ;)
ReplyDeleteNot long before it's out. :D
DeleteWhat a compelling narration Radhika. It's turning out to be a thriller and very engaging to the core.
ReplyDeleteIf you find time, do read my interview with Ramona:
https://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2016/05/23/the-enchantress-ramona-arena/
Thanks so much, Vishal! I sure will. 😊
DeleteUltimate piece of writing and mystery :D
ReplyDeleteEven I am writing something like this as murder mystery..but quite slow in writing as compared to you :P
Its just awesome :)
Thanks, Mrigank. I'm pretty sure yours will turn out real cool, we all have different styles, don't we? :)
DeleteUltimate piece of writing and mystery :D
ReplyDeleteEven I am writing something like this as murder mystery..but quite slow in writing as compared to you :P
Its just awesome :)
Super! With those verses, looks like this deep voice person is also a blogger/poet :) Well done! Heading over to part III :)
ReplyDeleteHaha, thanks so much, Parul! We can call them a poet, if not a blogger. 😂
DeleteGets more intriguing. You sure are getting into the skin of characters. This reminds me of our Jenny days
ReplyDeleteHaha, true! You are pretty late in reading the whole. 😅 Those sure were some uber cool days of storytelling!
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